I had entered more screenplay competitions seeking out that elusive first win. I had started to buy tickets for film festivals so that I could start networking — once the writer’s strike ended. I was planning on drafting a query letter for agents, so that once the strike was over, and they were in need of scripts to promote, I’d be prepared with an offer of a screenplay that had already been vetted by several competitions.
While I felt pretty good about where I stood, there was still something nagging me about the latest draft of my script for Dig Down.
The judge for the Page Turner competition had been very supportive of my work, and had offered much more than just surface level advice of ways to improve my script. We had been getting into the deeper levels, of working to develop the characters on an inner and even philosophical level. It had been such a productive meeting, extremely beneficial, and the judge had given me every indication that this was going to place well.
Which it did. As a finalist. But it left me to wonder…
Why didn’t it win?
I didn’t turn in the script at the absolute deadline, there were still a few days left before it passed, but it ultimately didn’t leave enough time for the judge – and not that this was being offered – to give feedback on the revisions that I had made to the screenplay. I had taken the advice I’d been given and implemented it throughout the script, but aside from how I placed, I had no idea how effective I’d been with the changes. For all I knew, I had already been inline to place as a finalist, and the changes I’d made just hadn’t derailed it.
With everything in a holding period – the results from the contests I’d entered wouldn’t be posted for awhile, the calendar hadn’t reached the dates the film festivals were scheduled, and with the strike going on, I couldn’t do anything about them anyway – I wanted to feel like I was still moving forward in some way. I wanted to keep my momentum going.
Although the strike prevented screenwriters from making any deals, I could still enter competitions. And one was coming up, or rather, one I had already entered was offering their summer competition – the Santa Barbara Screenplay Competition. They offered the same options for entering the contest as they had previously – a standard entry, one with notes from the judge, and an option to have a Zoom call with the head of the competition to go over the script.
I chose to enter the same way that I had previously, with notes from the judge. I was essentially getting notes on the notes that I’d implemented, but at least now I would have a sense of how well I’d actually incorporated them.